If I told you - forever


If I told you I love you,
- Would you smile or feel discomfort?

If I said I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you,
- Would you take my hand or push me away?

If I told you that you're beautiful,
- Would you be conceited or tell me that I am too?

If I left you,
- Would you be pleased..
or forever follow in my footsteps?




Words by Natalie
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Written on 2006-04-23 at 22:57

Tags Love  Loneliness  Sadness 

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ChiLLie
never ever read something that amazing.. reealy makes me cry='(..
You girl, is a true poet...
I'll keep on reading your texts, I simply can't stop...
* ^--c(',)--^ *
2006-06-20


Peter
beautiful honey, nothing but beautiful...
2006-04-24


Amanda Manmohan
This poem is simple yet extremely effective. I especially love the last three lines. Keep it up!
2006-04-23


AngryAngel
Absolutely beautiful <3
2006-04-23