- maybe a little immature... but sometimes it feels good to let it out...




You Know What?

 

Fuck you.

That's all I can

Say right now.

 

If it weren't for me,

You wouldn't have

The space to let it out.

 

It's obvious by your snubs

What you think of me.

And that's alright.

 

I don't like you either.

So fuck off; I mean it

From my heart.

 

And yes, I sure feel

Much better for this

Little outburst of mine!

 





Diary by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-06-07 at 17:03

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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
:D

I am sure that some readers can relate with this state of mind:) Have you ever tried to place your hand in the fire and then start saying fuck you to the fire that burns you? It's even more funny because before that the fire kept you warm:) If you feel inspired by my comment you have my permission to write a poem about it:)
2015-06-07



I guess we all need to let it out once in a while. Good for you!
:-) I hope you feel better.
2015-06-07


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
Ok, I get from this one that you are expressing a serious antipathy towards someone and that you have lost patience with this person for reasons not completely clear to the casual reader.
Just my read on this one.
2015-06-07