| Beginning
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2013-05-31
Good work
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| THE WAY IT SNOWED
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2012-03-19
Thanks Countryfog, perhaps I have taken note of that
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| From the sea skeleton
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2011-03-19
Good job bro, I love the line Immortal dance of dogonyaro leave. Toatal Africana. Kudos...
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| Terminated
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2009-10-28
Men, i love this write up, a sway of words. From Abortion to now Terminated.lol.. keep it up man u r good...
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| Terminated
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2009-10-28
Men, i love this write up, a sway of words. From Abortion to now Terminated.lol.. keep it up man u r good...
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| Love Reflects in You
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2009-10-14
A good write up, keep it up
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| The Lost Moonlight
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2009-07-07
Actually this is my first comment on your work, though i have read through some of your work in the past but turn a blind eye to it. But sincerely, most of your poetry is a source of inspiration to my write up and i love that. Keep it up girl, lady, mum etc. just guessing the appropriate word to address u with. GBU and lot of love....
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| Somewhere in the Middle
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2009-05-27
I guess i love the flow of ur write up, just like a wasted life after all. But the last stanza was sensible of letting one realise that there is still a choice no matter the pain all along. Beautiful work.
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| FROM THIS MOMENT
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2009-01-03
LOVE THIS POETRY. IT REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART.
IT'S REALY A MOST READ POETRY.
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| In the land of insanity
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2006-11-11
Hi night soul woman,
Now u are talking, i mean taking the words to the gods, it is a nice poem which tells more of what we can feel than see. Keep it up ma'am.
Owen
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| A diffuse exercise of power! (your vote or nomination counts)
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2006-11-04
Hi,
Your poem was okay, but from my point of view, it is a poem for all region of understanding, it simplicity was okay to many, it elongation was okay for few, but i could have prefer regid words and shorter lines. Just take people like me into consideration when writing, sometimes we stand as personal saint because pecaddilio dosen't murder us. GBU and keep it up.
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| Who's me and who's you
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2006-11-04
The costly wind,
Priceless to mortals
The print of many,
Tells a million legacy
The saint behind me,
The ruthless mudurer of my heart
The beauty i dreamt of,
Ended my world
Waoo, everyone has something say, good or evil, but base on comparison. I know who u are, what u wish to be and where u have always love to be. It tells in ur words. Keep up to ur writings. I remember alot from it.
Owen.
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| Spooked
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2006-10-31
Whats up,
a nice poem, but i think all 17 years ladies and gent on this web, believes in writing long poem, maybe it is just the way u think everyone could understand, but i will advice u to try on something though at times, so people will ask questions, alrigt. Take care
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from Gambia 