| muddleplinth and bethany converse and share cabinets
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2005-08-05
this one is very fun. it looks like you really have fun with your words, especially in this one.
and the funny bits too were great, such as
and
when they weren't looking, shoved gloops of
snot behind the radiator.
hee hee.
excellent writing.
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| Litter
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2005-08-05
I love November, it's nice and cold-like and comes before December. :P
This is another great piece of poetry, love the sounds throughout, especially the ending.
Very enjoyable.
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| Get
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2005-08-05
I like the word play quite well. I like the made up words too. This is highly original and easy to read from start to finish. No boredom anywhere here to be seen, quite intriguing piece of work.
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| Tuesday
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2005-08-05
oh dear. there is really a lot here. I see one part I want to catch and hold, then wham! there's another. ;)
very unique and fun to read.
the last stanza was especially good.
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from Syria 