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2005-08-11
I was expecting some twist at the end, so that we, the readers, would gain a lesson from your poem. However, tehre was none, but only an amusing situation that most of us can relate to fully. A fun and lively poem, dear Writer! I enjoyed it much!
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| Surrender
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2005-08-10
This certainly has personality!!
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| Rainwater
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2005-08-10
It's been modified and improved.
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| Vagabond
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2005-08-09
I saw your name on the front page and immediately thought: Damien Rice. Did his song inspire your name, or are you really the daughter of a blower? Other than that, I really enjoyed this poem! It is excellent and exciting: a true cry of independence: -- a victorious exultation! Continue celebrating your liberty, and write always, fo ryour style is exhilerating!
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| Then in the Morning
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2005-08-06
This was a bit long, but interesting, nonetheless.
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| smile for me
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2005-08-06
THis is a fantastic poem! It has sensuality, desire, and a flow that is unexceptionable! Excellent write!
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