| fucking life
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2005-10-01
Dunno what's going on with all the comments here, but I like your poem very much. Fuck life right back! ;D
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| Open up.
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2005-09-30
Very well done, your words are engaging. They express something deeply human.
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| Led on.
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2005-09-27
All your poems are great, but this is the one I choose to comment on.
This poem is enormously powerful, since you paint it with so many different emotions. It is full of longing, doubt, awe, and a sense of loss which fills me with sadness.
Yet I am uplifted by it, by your poetic language.
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| memories
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2005-08-31
This poem tells me: do not care about the past, all of history is not nearly as important as this moment right now. I agree. Totally.
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| Don't lose
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2005-08-31
I think so... :)
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| Don't lose
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2005-08-31
Nice poem - lovely thoughts!
Some notes about the spelling though, since you asked :)
1. Loose - lose.
2. Challeng - challenge
3. Fait - either "faith" or "fate".
4. Also, I've always been told to write "don't" and not "don't".
I hope that helped! :D
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| Heart Burn
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2005-08-24
I started feeling heart burn here, so you must have written a good poem!
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| Weaponless
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2005-08-20
Damn right, man! This is a great poem, not only because I feel that what you are saying is true, but also because how you put your words together. Well done indeed.
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| Kids Get Away With Murder.
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2005-08-20
Funny and scary at the same time. Disturbing to think what children can do in their childish ways.
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