| Enjoy the fucking view
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2005-09-02
Wow. Amazing. I love the lines:
"Come a little closer,
enjoy the fucking view."
The whole thing is great though. The wording is perfect. You are definitely talented. Great job =)
-nikkki
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| Soulmurder
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2005-08-29
Every word is so true. I don't even know what else to say. This is excellent. I love the title. =)
-nikkki
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| Can't Sleep
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2005-08-29
I love every word of this. You basically described all of my nights. I hope things get better for you. Good luck with everything. Great job =)
-nikkki
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| Losing against the rain
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2005-08-29
I love this. I could tell it would be awesome by the title, and it really is. I dont even know what else to say. The wording is excellent. You are so talented. Great job =)
-nikkki
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| The Hell He Made
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2005-08-29
This is so sad =( Beautifully worded though. I love how you took such a common subject and made it your own. My favorite line was, "The layer of skin breaks, just like my heart breaks." That one really stuck out for me. I hope everything gets better for you. great job =)
-nikkki
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| The Hell He Made
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2005-08-29
This is so sad =( Beautifully worded though. I love how you took such a common subject and made it your own. My favorite line was, "The layer of skin breaks, just like my heart breaks." That one really stuck out for me. I hope everything gets better for you. great job =)
-nikkki
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| eaten alive
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2005-08-29
Wow. Truly fascinating (I never used that word before when commenting on anything, so you know it's good). The wording is unbelieveably. You are very creative. I like it a lot. Great job =)
-nikkki
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| I'll love you in the dark
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2005-08-29
I like this. It's pretty and kind of sad. I love the darkness about it. The title made me interested to read it, and I'm glad I did. Great job =)
-nikkki
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