| Ch. 7: Dewey Gets Shot
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2016-11-27
I am intrigued in these. I am curious what the inspiration was behind them. I enjoy them very much dear friend. <3
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| Ch. 6: Meanwhile . . .
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2016-11-07
this is fantastic. wonderful
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| Poverty of the Soul
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2016-06-03
I really like the descriptive vocabulary. it really draws you in and catches your attention. well done
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| Go Me Let
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2012-05-03
ooo i love it
this was wonderful
amazing write, riveting
read i very much enjoyed
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| Love Reflects in You
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2011-07-15
this is so pure and amazing, i loved this text. you have a lot of talent. keep up the writing. i very much enjoyed the read.
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| Walking on Water
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2011-06-04
very emotional and personal. i loved it, truly. not sure what inspired this poem but dont give up all hope. sometimes things happen for what seems like no reason at all, but down the road you eventually figure it out or come to a means of an end. The text however really draws you in as a reader and i was able to almost feel the pain in your words. very well done.
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| Dreaming is for Lovers
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2011-06-04
this was a very good poem. i very much enjoyed it. i love the metaphors in it. very creative and very passionate. The poem is also very relatable.
great job!
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| In Your Black Hour Of Need
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2007-08-30
thats awsome. i really like that
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| Her Life
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2007-08-30
powerful and puts you in place of whar really goes on in this world behind enemy lines.
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| Without Warning
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2007-08-30
awsome!
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