clay

2007-10-26
I love the lyrical flow of this poem.
Thanks,
Cx

2007-10-26
Well written Rik. I especially liked '...an opinion is a slippery customer.' and also, 'better to let the tongue burn/in the hot air of its own ego.'

2007-10-24
Very nicely crafted. The change in the season that is happening around me now has now taken on new meaning.

Thanks,
Clay

2007-10-20
excellent imagery and allusions, the rhyming works without being laborious.

peace,
clay