| Letters To My Lover (That Never Got Mailed).
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2008-04-19
sweet jesus, i love these.
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| Touch
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2008-04-19
oh hai, lover =D
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| Five Star Love
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2008-03-03
luxurious, decadent, beautiful.
your diction is fabulous, your imagery beyond compare. the most valuable writers are ones who can write about something that might not outwardly interest me [love in a hotel?] and make it into their own. erase the cliches, turn it into something fun and amazing to read.
the only thing that jarred was the "when he whispered she followed enticing him to lead" <--- maybe throw a comma in there for clarification?
other than that, fantastic piece.
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| F*** This
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2008-03-03
we all have pent up feelings that need to be expressed somehow. and, in the end, words are just words. it is how we shape them, use them, define them, abuse them that gives them meaning.
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| Impossibly
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2008-02-26
bittersweet.
how is it that i am simultaneously uplifted and given hope, yet filled with a sense of tangy sorrow?
it would almost seem--
impossible.
beautiful work.
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| God Tangles and He Untangles.
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2008-02-26
1. three car pileup.
2. waterbottle.
3. kissing.
4. cat.
5. = lights? counts as lightswitch?
you know how neurotic i am.
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| God Tangles and He Untangles.
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2008-02-26
i desire.
many things.
for example, what was the fifth image you used? i never did do well at math.
this is so beautiful. i hope your teacher appreciates it half as much as i do. the ending. yeah wow.
so write more.
[yeah, they won't let me write anything else over at inked.
lame, much?]
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from Ireland 