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2006-01-10
I've written so many poems trying to get this feeling and message through, you got it so well in this one. I especially like the anchor off the rainbows arch bit :).
Thanks
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| About life 119 The truth about politics
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2005-08-27
There is a story about a president on fairydust with a button on his desk for happy endings though. No compromises there for sure.
Not that it matters ;).
Theo
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| My Little Green Lamp
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2005-08-20
We're always nice ;).
I like this alot. The shape of it is, and this is not a bad thing of course, regular. And the content of this poem isn't that regular adn that creates a great contradiction within the text somehow. Eh, yeah.
Anyway, like it a lot.
Theo
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| POLITICS OF CONTROL
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2005-08-20
I totally agree with you here RK, or at least I think so. We in the west believe that technology is the answer, without seeing that that technology might aswell be used to make the world even more unfair. We don't want to think about that the only thing that can change things is politics and economical changes, maybe just because it's not as exciting :).
A great poem, I love the sort of chaotic doomsday feel it has.
Theo
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| Kids Get Away With Murder.
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2005-08-19
Hehe, this is really funny actually. But very tru too. When you're a kid our system of moral or whatvere, hasn't really settled in you yet and you get away with a lot. Both to yourself and to others. Tells us alot about our system of moral I guess :).
Theo
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| A walk
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2005-08-18
I don't know what it is about the way you write, but it really successfully paints pictures in my mind :).
I can sort of picture you there in the park, strolling about. Am I getting scary? ;)
Theo
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| A WISH
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2005-07-19
I feel this way too, there is indeed a whole lot of garbage we need to get rid of in order to grow.
A very beatifully composed poem!
Thanks!
Theo
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| Magnolia Petals
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2005-07-12
A really beuatiful haiku Laura. Thanks!
Not sure if I've ever seen a magnolia tree, but I've seen the movie Magnolia, and maybe it's justa s awesome :).
Theo
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| InJestion
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2005-07-08
Man, I love this one.
Very powerful in the repetition, great rhymes and great pace.
And the hole imagery with the Jester, love it all.
Theo
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| *~Starry, Starry Night~*
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2005-07-06
I like his art a lot too, especially stuff from this charcoal portrait bok I have here at home.
You capture in this poem your love of his art, and also his suffering, and the suffering of a lot of artists I guess.
Nicely done!
Theo
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| Dinner's served
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2005-07-03
I too have to admit that I don't really get what you're going for here, but that's probably just em being slow :). I like the choice of words though. Simple, funny and a bit bizarre.
And honestly chasingtheday, if you find this poetry to be nonsense, there's really no point to give bad comments and down rate every piece the writer uploads, is there ;).
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| DEATH OF A SONG
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2005-06-15
Very powerful and moving, puts the reader right in the situation.
Enjoyed reading this alot!
lou
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| Rooster Porn
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2005-06-12
I love it!
It made me laugh my ass off, I don't know if that's what you intended, but honestly it did.
It really depicts well the behaviour of roosters, and some humans too I guess :).
Keep it up
lou
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| While You Slept
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2005-06-07
This poem feels like a very short scene of a movie, where you egt to know a lot from just a few seconds of film.
I love the rich, light language and the sweeping motion that I feel you create in the first and second verse, where you follow your own eyes as they wander across the scene.
I enjoyed rading this a lot, keep it up!
lou
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| A satire
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2005-06-05
I love the choice of words and overall feel of this text.
You really captured the feeling of a single moment where you get like a flash of insight.
Keep it up
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