| my truth
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2010-06-27
I really like this. The raw emotion just spilling out onto the page, good job.
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| An Outside Perspective...
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2009-08-01
So true. Good write
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| Disgraced
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2009-06-27
This poem is good and well rhymed like the others you write. I agree with most of this poem but the gay thing I don't really see anything wrong with it I don't see it as evil I have friends that are gay and they are very nice and caring. By your poetry I get that your very religous but I think we'd prefer more people to be gay then to have rapist and murderers but the poem itself is good I just think the ideas and opinions need to be more open.
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| Lost
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2009-03-06
Wow! So much emotion in your poem. It was really sad. I hope you found your way. Great poem keep writing
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| bursting out
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2008-11-21
WOW! That's well done. Please write more poems. I can't wait to read more of your poems.
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| d.r.k.
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2008-11-21
WOW! So true and heart felt I love it. Well done.
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| proved wrong.
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2008-11-21
WOW! Well done I also know how that feels but the positive thing is that we can turn our bad experiences into deep and wonderful poems. This poem is very strong and I really like it again well done.
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| The Bench
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2008-10-20
Ok, I'm not that good with comments so i don't write them that much but when i read this I was like I have to comment its very ripping and heart moving. Just incredible. Hey I almoct cryed and its not easy to make me cry
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| Pushed to the edge
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2008-10-17
This poem is that good that words can't describe but I'll try to anyway. This poem is brilliant its just WOW...
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| Panic
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2008-10-16
It's really simple, but yet brilliant and that explains how i feel most of the time.
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| brokenness
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2008-10-11
WOW, it's so simple but it's so deep and true. Well done
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| Dear Mother, A Letter of Remembrance
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2008-10-11
Kathy, this poem has gotten so many comments I don't know what else to say. So I'll just make it simple BEAUTIFUL.
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| Desire
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2008-10-10
OMG (i'm a teen it means "oh my god") that's brilliant I love it> Really intense and deep.
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