JAMES ROSS

2012-02-01
Such pace! This poem really swept me up, thank you.

2011-06-17
*Well done

2011-06-17
I know you say it could be better, but I the rawness in the language and the form is very effective- its almost visceral.

2011-02-26
Excellent use of regular rhythm and rhyme to create a sense of detachment concerning such an emotional scene.

Wonderfully done!