Minhocao

2011-09-15
I don't know if you meant to, but alliteration you wove through this is gorgeous.

I also really loved the symbolism; the trees, the sun, and the prayer. beautiful

2011-07-28
loved them all, but I have to admit I have a weakness for a well written tanka - its so hard to pull off the subtle shift in subject that the form requires, and yet you did it effortlessly.

Amazing.

2011-07-19
I have to echo the the other commenter - I really love the imagery of the saguaro. beautiful!

2011-07-08
What I really liked was the way you wove the words in with the rhythm of walking. beautiful imagery!