| His Frame
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2021-07-10
Thanks guys.
I am only just coming round to read your beautiful and encouraging comments.
I will purpose to right and publish more often.
Lotsa luv to everyone!
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| ANNOUNCEMENT FOR ALL
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2006-05-09
Ola! Count me in! I think it's a very nice idea! Dennis In'kwa (Kenya)
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| A Through Z
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2006-04-26
enjoyed it!!
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| Revenge
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2006-03-23
Such a lovely poem! You make spending time on this bay much fun and worth one's while! Kudos
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| A FUNNY Story.
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2006-03-14
It IS a poem ..and it's very very Good! And funny too!
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| ...Watching You...
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2006-02-24
This piece!! Very well thought out,grips you till the very end...the suspense held me captive! Absolutely love it!
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| DRY POET
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2006-02-17
Tell me about it! I liked the intro too! Nice work!
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| I CANNOT
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2006-02-07
So true..... so true! I identify with this poem a great deal!
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| ...Sometimes I feel I am the wick...(to Zoya, my candle)...
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2006-02-04
Kip kip kip...where do I even start! This is magical, talk about love and tragedy huh! This is definitely a favourite...definitely!
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| GROW UP or you'll be my EX
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2006-02-02
Oh boy!Is Tony in trouble or what! I feel you though,childish behavior from grown ups can really get into your nerves! This is raw stuff. I had a good time with this one. Nice work!
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| Sometime I feel I am the Candle off your Honeycomb...(answer to kip's honeybee)...
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2006-02-02
I absolutely love this one! Though a bit sombre in the end..will be hard to bring back life into this one but what the heck, might just give it a shot..might! After the bee i wondered what you would become.Kudos!
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| My Arrival
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2006-02-02
A certainly humble and promising start.Welcome to the bay my friend!
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| Sometimes I feel I am the Flower... (in response to Kip)...
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2006-02-01
Hey Z, tell you what i liked what you started here and you can bet your 'tosh' I'll join in with somethin too! HaHaHa!! ...THe '...sometimes..' craze has truly blown me away.
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| The Riverbank.
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2006-01-31
Why did you stop there....? I could read stuff like this the whole day!!Serious! Warm,tender,simple and absolutely captivating! Really nice work!!
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| ...Sometimes I feel I am a leaf...(in response to Zoya)...
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2006-01-31
Hey kip this is truly AMAZING!!...I long I yearn for my one to return.....beautiful words, beautiful flow,beutiful response.I wonder what Zoya wil say about this one lol.Nice work!
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| ...Memorable Moments...
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2006-01-30
.....a conglomerate of soothing rhymes...
Powerful phrases,powerful words! Really enjoy reading your work!
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| My Ass
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2006-01-30
.....you spruce it in tight jeans
flaunt it with all the means,
Talk about it 24-seven
as though your posterior heaven,
I'd love not make a pass
but oh!... how i love your ass!
I also dont understand why am fascinated! Thats a bold one Kat!
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| My Ass
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2006-01-30
.....you spruce it in tight jeans
flaunt it with all the means,
Talk about it 24-seven
as though your posterior heaven,
I'd love not make a pass
but oh!... how i love your ass!
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| To ALL the poets here.
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2006-01-28
Being one of the newest guys around,that's certainly very encouraging!!
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| Love for one never seen!
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2006-01-28
teary and very powerful!!
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| ...Fourteen Falls...
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2006-01-27
...and visualise the great tango....
Absoluteley fabulous!!
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| Buck With Pride
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2006-01-26
.....I shall be the lust you crave...your sin you need....I just love this one!! Thats a whole lotta pride for one buck,lol,I see me in your work!
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| Buck With Pride
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2006-01-26
.....I shall be the lust you crave...your sin you need....I just love this one!! Thats a whole lotta pride for one buck,lol,I see me in your work!
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| ...Bloody Ingrates!...
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2006-01-25
Very well conjured piece...intense in disgust and deep with irritation! An immensely fiery approach to want of intellect that requires a great wealth of thought to come up with. Truly amazing but we both know i cant give you a 6! Kudos!!
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| Today I Saw A Goblin.
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2006-01-24
Did you really see a Goblin?... There is a certain real-ness in it that actually makes me feel I was there too! It trickles really well.Bravo!
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| At midnight
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2006-01-24
the spook in it is evil-ly made divine by its sweet depth, a well contorted true masterpiece!! I can wake up any time of day to go thru it again...even at midnight!!!
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from Kenya 