My Ass
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2006-01-31 a lovely poem! i think a hint as to why we men have this attraction to this fascinating mass of muscles lies in the line of yours:
"...and long to feel my ass." ;)
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I can't play
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2006-01-29 a super work of poetry ;) nicely done!
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"Way too high"
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2006-01-29 ..and i laughed at the end of it :) absurdly witty, yet so true and honest. It was lovely, thanks!
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Sweet little Camilla
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2006-01-29 nice! a quick read, but a bam(!) surprising ending ;) I liked the way you gradually made went from sweetness into madness! keep up the good work
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who are you?
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2006-01-29 (sorry, keep forgetting to rate...)
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who are you?
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2006-01-29 lovely! great work. and it makes me think.. I'll get a cup of coffee and sit down with some music - "am I me?"
thx!
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I'm In So Deep
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2006-01-29 ..ah, forgot to rate :p
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I'm In So Deep
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2006-01-29 A wonderful, yet easy-written poem. I like it, like it alot! Thanks ;)
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