This text is meant for those who aren't what they want to be... realize it and do something about it...


who are you?

Your foundations crumble
Your keep diving like a tear
Your screams turn to mumbles
You don't know but you don't dare

You're not enough,
You're not you
You're a bluff

You don't see the true view
If you want to be free
You have to realize you're me




Poetry by Peter
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Written on 2006-01-26 at 16:58

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Zoya Zaidi
"A mind who knows others is a wise;
HE who knows himself is enlightened!"
Tao Teching

I think Peter, self-search is the other name of life!

(((((((hugs)))))))

A beautiful thought provoking poem!

By the way have you read my " Who Am I ?"

xxx, Love, Zoya
2006-02-24


Malin Johansson
This is really good!!! the only thing to do is realice who you are, and set you free, then you can be who you are !!! GREAT!!!
2006-02-20


Utianima
(sorry, keep forgetting to rate...)
2006-01-29


Utianima
lovely! great work. and it makes me think.. I'll get a cup of coffee and sit down with some music - "am I me?"

thx!
2006-01-29


Celtic boy
this really made me think.
2006-01-26


Veld Cooper
Now THIS is really darn good, thought-provoking stuff, Peter! You beg the question - how do we become you?????
2006-01-26


penfold18
Many say we are what we are but few really achieve what they want to be :-)
2006-01-26