| Poem: Subtopia
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2013-02-09
Thank you for the feedback Jim.
Maybe the poem is a bit obscure. However, I do believe that a text may take on several different meanings for different readers based on their cultural backgrounds. That is one reason I ask what this poem means when I write it on this forum.
And what about the order of the stanza's. Can any of them stand alone as a poem? Or do they need each other to make sense?
Also, I would like feedback on language, spelling and idioms. English is my 2nd language (I'm Norwegian), so I will appreciate corrections if you spot mistakes.
If you need to read my past poetry I have made it available through MediaFire. Clicking on my username should bring up info on the direct link...
I believe you would have to be logged in at The Poetry Forum in order to see the poem there. It is in the feedback section.
Yours Sincerely
Kjotleik of Norway
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from Norway 
