| Is it a Nightmare; Or Is it True?
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2006-03-09
"Oh! When will man be that wise?"
Soon, I hope, very soon. 'nSh'Allah.
Very moving write, Zoya.
Sunsun,
Tai-Li
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| Why?
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2006-03-09
Impressive, very impressive, Morpheus. You managed to hold back, where this easily could have turned into a tearful rant.
My compliments.
Sunny regards,
Tai-Li
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| Advisory!
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2006-03-09
Oh boy, I hope she'll listen to your advice!
Interesting poem, but I was wondering if you really needed all those: gonna and wanna's?
The context of this poem is rough enough, so you don't really need that kind of slang.
Just wondering.
Sunny regards,
Tai-Li
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| WHO ARE YOU?
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2006-03-09
Very good write, Boy. I especially like the last stanza.
Sunny regards,
Tai-Li
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| Goodbye
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2006-03-09
What a lovely and touching tribute, She.
I hope you will show this poem to their respective families. It will warm their sad and cold hearts.
Sunny regards,
Tai-Li
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| Manque d'air à la naissance
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2006-03-09
A very beautiful, melodious and tender poem. Thank you for sharing, Rik.
Sunny regards,
Tai-Li
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| Dare to Love You?
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2006-03-08
Dear Malin,
This is, quite obviously, a first draft of a very lovely poem. Please, go over it again, correct the grammar, take out the typos, put in the right punctuation and you'll come up with a gem. A real gem!
This comment, with tremendous respect to your writing in a (to you) foreign language.
Sunny regards,
Tai-Li
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| 8th of March (An Introspection)
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2006-03-08
Food for thoughts, this one. Good poem.
One little typo: shouldn't virgin femin-ity be virgin femin-in-ity?
Sunny regards,
Tai-Li
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from France