| Please explain what love is
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2005-06-10
Wanta nkow what love is?
Read me "Ode to God"....
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| You were the only dream
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2005-06-10
It sounds like you're writing the hurt away...which is excellent! AND your poetry seems to get better and better with each write (and I enjoyed the 1st one)!
I'd've rated the others, but didn't see the option til now!
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| Sasja, your voice is weak
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2005-06-10
Unrequited love?
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| Waves
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2005-06-10
Pretty and evocative...
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| I live behind an ugly wall
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2005-06-10
I love to see the changes
in the seasons every year;
for they serve as a reminder
things are NOT what they appear...
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| Flames
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2005-06-10
Even seeds have to die before they're planted, and live again... surely we're no different!
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| A Jewish girl
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2005-06-10
I really enjoyed what you wrote - it seemed as if you could've continued, and I would've enjoyed that MORE...maybe you'll add to it?
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