Victoria Pearson

2007-02-06
Yes this little piece is worth reading.

It was the thoughts, of someone observing changing weather.

I thought it was expressive and nice.

I was not sorry that I read the piece, and although the writer

is much younger than I am, the piece was written as I may have..

2007-01-25
I am afraid this piece is really not worth reading. First I don't know what this is, is it poetry, or just ranting.

I am an American and I feel deeply about our men and woman in a war that is causing death to so many.

It is not necessary, however, to get a point across to give way to abuse and quite disgusting language as is used in this piece.

It does no good to anyone, those on both sides of this horrible war.

There are countless numbers of persons on both sides that I am sure want this mayhem to end.

Perhaps there are those that approve of your standard of writing
I am not one of them.

I have service people in my family, needless to say I love them and wish them only the best, to come home healthy with all of their limbs in tact.

If you as an american conduct yourself in the way you describe, I am ashamed of you.

2006-06-20
The relationship between mother and daughter..How wonderful it can be...The love can not be exchanged for any other....

I felt the joy you and your mother feel...it is something that you explain so fully...

Your writing is so warm and loving...

God Bless...many hugs..

2006-06-16
The essence of this piece is beautiful....your word usage fills this piece with meaning that is both delicate and sensual at the same time...

A very lovely read....I enjoyed it so much....

Thanks for sharing..

2006-06-15
I will just comment on the word usage..I find that you have an excellent use of words in the right places....

Many of the words you use are not often used in poetry writing...but you do well at that.....as far as the essence of the piece..you know that, so I will not comment on that...I wish you well.

Thanks for sharing...

2006-06-15
I don't know you very well...you did make note of one of my pieces..but I wish you God speed ..in what ever you do.....be careful, be on the right side of life...Take Care..

2006-06-14
A very sad story that happens over and over..There is a saying "But for the Grace of God go I"...people should remember that...This young man did what he felt he had to do to be able to care for his mother...I Praise him for that...He got the strength to carry on through a tormented childhood....But for him, I am sure his mother would have had a terrible time...

My Prayer go out for him..My Jehovah forever keep him in his memory

2006-06-14
A very lovely piece speaking of friendship...so many call themselves your friend ...until you need them..

I can see that you would be a friend in the true sense of the word....

I enjoyed the read..

Thanks for sharing..

2006-06-12
that is a very beautiful piece of poetry....the word usage is excellent...form is good...I enjoyed the read...did you write that today?

2006-06-12
forgot to rate the piece...sorry!

2006-06-12
All God's children are loved by Him..and so are you...Be happy young man....That is what makes living worth while....That and Prayer.....Take Care

2006-06-11
forgot to rate....sorry!

2006-06-11
I mean this from the bottom of my heart...This piece almost made me cry...the tenderness was apparent..Few words...much meaning...truly a beautiful few words....Loved it...

Thanks for sharing...

2006-06-11
This is the first time I have come upon this area of the site..I am very new here. perhaps just under a month..while I cannot comment on what was said "decision to make" because I am new....

I just thought I would say why it is I joined this site..I have been writing for a long time...have been on other sites as well..my purpose is to allow others to view what I call my Poetry and relay to me what they liked or did not like about my work...I have critiqued work that I have seen here, the only thing that I can say is whether I liked it or not and why.

I know I will not make money at this craft, but I want to become as good as I can be.

I enjoy using different forms of poetry writing....Sonnets.. Triolets..Villanelle, Rictameter....and others..but if others do not choose to write in these forms...so be it...I happen to use the upper case I when it is called for ...but if another chooses not to ...so be it...I write because I have it in me and so I enjoy it...

I would like to be a part of this site...and I hope that everyone will get along..it will certainly make me happy....as I want all to critique of my work good or bad I am ready to accept any voice. want to be the best that I can be...and that means and endless learning process.

Glad to be here !!!

2006-06-10
I forgot to rate the piece....so here is it...I will get the hang of this site very soon...

2006-06-10
exquisite imagery....a love song..written in word of ectasy...An exciting piece.... I enjoyed this piece...hugs