rasheed

2006-08-10
zainab it is magnificiant lines for lovers you think about love and wright for lovers.
is it biographical l doubt because you are cute so all the eyes and the soul will turn you. it is natural.
you are luck take care.

2006-07-25
Zainab in these four lines you have discribed nicely the qualitys of love which one expecting from a lover.
there have a buch of love in your heart so you could wright a lot of poems.
best regards
rasheed

2006-07-25
Zainab in these four lines you have discribed nicely the qualitys of love which one expecting from a lover.
there have a buch of love in your heart so you could wright a lot of poems.
best regards
rasheed

2006-07-25
Zainab in these four lines you have discribed nicely the qualitys of love which one expecting from a lover.
there have a buch of love in your heart so you could wright a lot of poems.
best regards
rasheed

2006-07-25
Zainab in these four lines you have discribed nicely the qualitys of love which one expecting from a lover.
there have a buch of love in your heart so you could wright a lot of poems.
best regards
rasheed

2006-07-25
Zainab in these four lines you have discribed nicely the qualitys of love which one expecting from a lover.
there have a buch of love in your heart so you could wright a lot of poems.
best regards
rasheed

2006-07-25
Zainab in these four lines you have discribed nicely the qualitys of love which one expecting from a lover.
there have a buch of love in your heart so you could wright a lot of poems.
best regards
rasheed

2006-07-25
your understanding about love is unique.
and you are ready to sacrifice anything instead of pure honest love. one can understand you. and you ask to the lover to look into your eyes honestly. so you can read how much sincere he is.
it is a great work.
rasheed.

2006-07-24
lam, the eighth colour of rainbow.
your confidence and your awareness in your innermost is excellent. you see something specil in you which the others cant do. it is really brave.
and in this perception you could see something difference around you.
hope you will exprss it.
rasheed.

2006-07-24
Walking alone through the lunar road of dreams. a very intresting imaginary.
and it a typical work can read and read
and its take the readers also throughout the journey.
very nice
rasheed

2006-07-24
The message of your poem is so clear which is hearing alwayas somewhere in our suroundings. willingness to surrender everything to save the soul.
its cry or an appeal of distructed and frustracted. you done it very well
rasheed

2006-07-24
to night is the night. is a very nice poem l think its have a heart touching rhymes
and it is deeply influensed and transfer me a lot of pain. which the poet feel at the solitery nights.
a night and its experiences are feel many in diferent way according their moood.
expect more work from you.
and wish all the best
rasheed

2006-07-24
lt is really an ideal work which can do one who adhering and caring the nature.
and embracing the goodness of it.
looking every morning with new hope
l like it a lot and wish you all the best.
expecting much more better work from you.
rasheed.

2006-07-24
lt is a great work which tell many inbetween the lines.
some times the love is brutally cheated.
and the pay of it will be almst a lifetime.
l like it very much it deeply touch me.
expect much more from you.
rasheed

2006-07-23
you have feel the deep love and missing it from life. the poem beutifully narate the value of love and its influence in life. ofcourse love is most valuable than anything in the earth and heaven.
when we feel true love frome someone
it will flourish our life. and the lack of love
will felt like missed something valuable in life. l like it and l love it a lot.
thanks.
rasheed

2006-07-22
This work is really take me somewhere.
in mild childhood expeerience.
and somewhere in the dream which i dreamt in the past.
The imagination is excellent.
and expressions are colourfull and vivid.
rasheed

2006-07-22
life where are you. the serching of poet for the meaning of life in the lite of natures truth like moon light. the poet is suspicious about the goodness of the world from her experience. and would like to change the world a lot through a new concept of creation have to change thousands of things. eventhough she experess her limitations to do so.
very nice poem.
which spread the rays of thoughts and the relation of man and nature and the dissatisfaction of mind.
like it very much
love it very much
a lot of lot of love.
rasheed

2006-07-18
earth is no more express the concern of poet to the earth as well as the humanity.
The philathrophist inside the poet tell us the cruelty of war and the pain of its victims. the poet responds to the social issues and interupt it as part of the victims.
Best regards
Rasheed

2006-07-18
a poor litle girls with a cruel wicked father
and her privacys are taken away behind the door she always dipressed. really it showed the realm of almost the girl who lost her mother. ln some few words the poet cleerly narate this heart breaking picture. there is not mcuh words but it says more and more about which it doesnt says.
regards
Rasheed.