| What if. . . (one line)
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2007-02-07
This was a cool and creative line,
brilliant even, I wouldn't have thought of that.
I enjoyed it and will read more by you :)
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| Writers block - in the limbo of thoughts
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2007-02-07
Great poem and it has a nice flow,
I really liked it :)
I like the concept and the description and everything
and it's very inspiring and probably great medication against writing-block! I like it and rate it highly.
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| There was a young lady from Norway
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2007-02-07
I really liked this poem, it's really cool,
entertaining and great and very enjoyable.
I wish you a nice day and I look forward to read more
by you :)
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| The lamp post and the firehydrant
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2006-11-15
Sorry about how it looks, hope it's still readable.
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| I'm sat here alone
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2006-10-09
Nice poem!
There is a few spellingmistakes and the rhytm doesn't work all the way, but for some reason that doesn't matter.
I can relate to parts of this poem and it's sharp, honest and full of emotions.
It's the way one often thinks as a teen
as one grows older and starts to view things from a higher perspective and you've captured that in a great way.
I really like it and I hope you keep writing cause that's a great way to deal with all the feelings spining in one's head.
Great poem and I rate it a four :)
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| Maltesers Haiku (for Cathys chocolate challenge)
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2006-09-14
Sorry I put this at poetry by the way,
I kind of didn't notice that Haikus had their own category.
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| Where shall I begin?!
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2006-08-24
I like this poem,
but somehow I can't explain why
I'll try anyway:
I like the small rhymes,
they're fun and sweet and give the poem a youthful flavour in my oppinion.
Other things I enjoy is the subject
and mostly everything.
My only objection is that I think
the ending is a bit abrupt,
but that could be just me.
Anyway, I like it as I've said
so good job!
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from Norway