Nils Teodor
Very good!
silent awareness
might be our essence...
2009-10-06

melanie sue
This is beautiful as well as mystical. Haunting message in that last line. You may be silence to some, but I hear the music in your soul. Excellent poem. :)
2009-09-07

Eli
This hits a place very deep. We can often get too caught up in the excitement of another that we forget the humanness of them, the imperfections that challenge our false expectations, instead of seeing it as actual perfection in the first place.

This text is a great capture of the mistake that many of us have made, and of the longing to be accepted just as we are.

Thank You for sharing it with us.
2009-09-07

LordParzifal
I know who you are

a fraction maybe

;)

like this place, somewhat
it's like a microblog of a big poetry community

maybe it can get bigger in time
I remember the golden era with free communties 1997-2003
and the napster times
which also included texts you had written
and you spread them, animations or music you'd made as files between friends
that's what internet is for

Be well,
LPatrikWJ
2009-09-06

ken d williams
You are you , the one and only you , one of a kind , unneke.
Enjoyed your poem very much.
Ken ( D Williams )
2009-09-06