Cinquain


Sighing



Whispers
soft breeze of words
soothing my heart with love
taking me to a special place

sighing...




Poetry by Mariza Góes
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Written on 2005-08-05 at 01:59

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this is light and endearing... has a kind of floaty feel to it, you know... i like it very much :) love when its felt that way... oh what a nice release to the heart it is, eh... sincerely well done... i enjoyed this very much :)

later...xx
2005-08-05


Celticpride
A beautiful write that anyone who has loved understands. The gentleness caresses much like your words. I'm getting all mushy for my girl just reading this!
2005-08-05


Claire
I like this, it's gentle and pretty - it nearly works as some kind of onomatopoeic acrostic even, reading vertically down the left "wssts" does sound quite whispering and wind-like. whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhtssssssssssssssssssssssssssswhhhhhhhttttssssssss

hmmmm... well nearly


:)
2005-08-05


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
arr that special place, and who can deny that for anyone. that holy dove that is never free :)
2005-08-05