I returned once more to the North to see again that rare enchantment I found in the soft land. And I saw her but once more as the setting sun swathed her face with its radience. Yet, even that could not compete. How could my heart?


Once More by M.A.Meddings. 12th Paladin

Your beautiful face was an inspiration
Always
And through the enchanted time
I became captured
Your winning smile
Bringing a rapture
That weakened me
Yet
I scarcely realised
That your beauty
was so devastating
Until that night
As the setting sun tried to compete
With its radiance
And lost the battle,
I too lost my heart
once more.



this poem is a fantasy poem in the Paladin series



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Written on 2006-05-09 at 07:02

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Kathy Lockhart
your fantacy is one that should never end. thanks again for adding to this one. kathy
2006-05-10


Zoya Zaidi
Sorry Mike, it is the sonnet no. XVIII
2006-05-09


Zoya Zaidi
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate."
Shakespeare Sonnet no. XVII
You know Mike why I quote the bard here?
((((hugs))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-09


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
You just keep rolling them out. A romantic you most definetly are and a hero too! Great write.
2006-05-09



Once again a glowing poem from our Paladin and hero!
2006-05-09


Malin Johansson
B E A U T I F U L
2006-05-09


penfold18
A fantasy maybe but I felt drawn into it, wonderful words Mike.
2006-05-09



wonderful mate is the only word for it,, My hats off to you,,,Eddy
2006-05-09


she
You are truly a knight of words......very sweetly described till I am left to wonder whose beauty it is that is so devastating that even the sun's (oh my!) radiance is incomparable?????Very beautifully thought out.
2006-05-09