A poem of love lost.


They are all gone

They are all gone
They have all gone, Sonia,
The insane crowd that strutted thy sanctuary
Listen to the silence that sweeps across the field
Feel, in sheer calmness, the sweetness of the zephyr
As Nature Purges the pestilence that hitherto bred thy environs

They are all gone! Father, mother, cousin, friend and foes
Clerics, choir and the hawks that flew above thy sky
For the wailing of your kins made you seethe
The buzzing of the earthly choirs made you churn
And the rantings of the clerics made you groan

Now they are all gone, with their glib eulogies
Noah of the new generation, stand by thy hearth
Jocund to speak to you, phoenix from the ground of loss
Here I stand, my love, to bid you sing the tones of old
That made me gleam with love, for you were my light

Sonia! Look, the verdant meadow lies fallow
The finch now chirrups in loneliness, those celestial notes
Which thou would blend with thy amorous pipe
Here I stand! Sonia, talk to me, talk to me my only love
Forget not the covenant we made, in thine world, I still love thee.
So, talk to me, Sonia, Sonia talk to me, talk to me Sonia Sonia Sonia
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Poetry by Gilbert Shang Ndi
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Written on 2016-05-30 at 18:26

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Kathy Lockhart
Such beautiful language. I feel I dare not tread upon it. I feel like I am reading writings from King David or King Solomon in the poetry of Psalms or Song of Songs in the Old Testament in the Bible. Lovely and so powerful!
2016-06-09


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Most of the time, poems written like this, in that ridiculous atavistic fashion, with "thys" and "hithertos," give me a pain, but there is a majesty to this poem. I like it. Nevertheless, I encourage you to write as if you live in the twenty-first century, not the sixteenth.
2016-06-02


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
Though this is a poem of loss, I enjoyed reading it very much for the images and syntax and rhythms, as well as the content.

The first stanza begins with silence, the last with chirping. Nice.
2016-05-31