Denial

Denial kicks in at the thought of the end
It will not be a pretty one

And the days drag your soul as you try to defend
the innocence that's long gone.



Poetry by zana
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Written on 2016-06-24 at 01:35

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Are there any pretty ends? Only with expensive fireworks. I like this.
2016-06-29


Kathy Lockhart
It is like a slap across the face when you cannot defend any longer the end. You have a way of really delivering the message very strongly with few words. Well done. Brava!
2016-06-26



I hate painful endings and tend to dwell in denial much to long al well.
Well written.
Ashe
2016-06-25



Harrowing words. The placement of which is so beautiful, done so well, I can't but help to look in awe at your talent.
2016-06-24