Him 2

he left
to make new tracks for everyone else to follow
to fix another place
to better other people

without finishing bettering me

unlike him, i deny the greater picture
he left me... with the others
but he left me...

I aspire to be half the person he is
but right now... that feels impossible



Poetry by zana
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Written on 2016-06-24 at 01:44

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Kathy Lockhart
So much sadness, written in small letters showing the smallness you feel. The delivery is superb. The spaces between the lines are full of the sadness and the pain.
2016-06-26



A feeling known by too many of us. So beautifully portrayed so succinctly put bravo
2016-06-24