The world ages with us.

As we age the world ages with us,
All the tress, the flowers and the birds,
The grass so green, sky so blue and cows that come in herds,
The wind, rain, the beaming Sun, the clouds that hang so grey,
Nature ages so does life, as does everything to this day,
So don't stress too much about being the greatest, do your best and show the world you,
Time ages as the clock ticks the pendulum's aging too.



Poetry by Melissa Ormond
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Written on 2016-09-24 at 11:47

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Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Gets didactic in the second last line. Else a fine piece.
2016-09-25


shells
Much enjoyed, clever final line.
2016-09-25



beautiful last line. the second last one seems incomplete though
2016-09-24



Ah, yes, even the pendulum ages! Nicely done.
2016-09-24



well, it's an interesting philosophical question...about who ages who...well done
2016-09-24


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Exultant work.
Ken
2016-09-24