Broken Wings





CRUSHED! DRAGGED DOWN! PULLED UNDER!
Once happy skies now dark and ripped with thunder!
Negative self talk, others opinions dragging you down
You've almost convinced yourself others don't want you around.

Depression and anxiety are NOT fun
Falling apart, coming undone,
BUT although often hidden, there's ALWAYS sun,
And.....
.....If you dare to dream that high,
broken wings CAN still fly!

15/10/2016
~ L. Munro ~



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Read 874 times
Written on 2016-10-15 at 01:49

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
A wonderful piece that describes depression well and gives hope. I am not really worthy of judging poetry. But I thought it was great.
2016-10-21


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Those who are down , can be like a rubber ball , bonuses back again. :)
Ken :)

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2016-10-15



A lovely poem with encouraging words. Isn't there a time when we all need to hear this? Thanks for sharing.
Ashe

Language: 4
Format: 4
Mood: 5
Overall: 4
2016-10-15