marketa (con't.)

 

~

 

i'm not sure   i say   and i say it

in a way

she seems to understand

 

i talk a little of the others  

a little about 

loving and losing   trite as it may sound

 

about being alone

and being okay with being alone   but wondering

what happened

 

and i guess more importantly

will it happen again

if i give myself to her as i so want to do

 

she's wondering if i'm a project

she wants to undertake

 

~

 





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Written on 2016-11-13 at 08:10

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Ann Wood The PoetBay support member heart!
Love it well done Jim
2018-03-13



the last two lines really ache. what happens next? I want to know.
2016-11-22


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Really nicely written. Everything brings us very naturally to those last two lines.
2016-11-16


Kathy Lockhart
hmmmm, oh, these new meetings are tempting and mysterious as life and beginnings are. You write just enough, reveal just enough--writer and reader/ perspective new lovers,--opening the first chapter...

Oh, I am eagerly awaiting the next...page?
2016-11-13



So many things to wonder about, wish for, be afraid to try, to hurt, to be happy. Why is being alone so hard sometimes and why do we yearn for the freedom of it at other times? Our brains can be so complex. I wish often for a simple brain that only thinks in the moment. Oh, it's beautiful and sunny! I am happy. I ate a meal ... I am full and happy. My friend is gone ... I will take a walk. :)
I enjoyed reading this and knowing that others wonder just like I do.
Ashe
2016-11-13