Numb


so quiet, so calm
my head, my world
so numb

where are you storm?
where are you lightning?
thunder?

I long for wind, for rain
at least a bracing breeze
to caress my cheek
my body, my soul.

no, not here
the air is still
so quiet, so calm
so numb




Poetry by passed out
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Written on 2005-08-06 at 18:17

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Commentally Ill
completely numbing.
2005-08-07


epohonci
i love the questions about where are storm and thunder and lightning, but as a funny sidenote, it makes me think of that movie Rundown with the guy acting like he could fight. if you've ever seen it, hopefully you'll smile. if not, well, watch it. :) and whatever the case, nice poem. i rate it with a 5.

epohonci
2005-08-06


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
life's a mad ride, sometimes we get stuck though in apathy.
2005-08-06