GFU #3

eyes light up

by realising

that bloodied hearts

can find release

that the spill

of crimson liquid

is the first stage

in finding peace

 

and in the spark 

eyes glow like orbs

feasting

on the light

waiting for the

rainbows

you'll never find

in the night   





Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2017-04-28 at 20:33

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
This is great. And absolutely true.
2017-05-04


shells
Wow I like! Especially the 🌈
2017-04-30


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo!
2017-04-28



I love the first line, the whole stanza, and the end is a perfect poem. I like this.
Ashe
2017-04-28