Snorkling the Waters Time Has Walked By

I did a dust dive today
Finding relics of the past
Padded with grey,
Dampaned,
Faded.

I blew,
And it looked like new,
But the dust got in my eye

It hurt.

I did a dust dive today
It only gave me sore eyes
And dirty clothes.




Poetry by fungi
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Written on 2006-05-19 at 18:24

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Zoya Zaidi
A very good metaphor of dust, time and digging into the past. Then the dust getting into the eyes and watering of eyes. A very cleverly concieved poem.
I LIKE THE TITLE TOO.
**hugs**
welcome again tothe bay.
love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-19