A haiku about realisation


Surrender by M .A. Meddings

defeated am I
By your deeper love for him
surrendering now



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Written on 2006-05-20 at 03:25

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Lourdes
.................
It takes the greatest man to surrender.
Myself I would never do it, but I am still a child.
A strong Haiku. Annoying and brilliant.
2006-05-20


Malin Johansson
Very good haiku... and you get the different feelings expressed very good in those few lines...
hugs to you dad:))
2006-05-20


Kathy Lockhart
A haiku written perfectly. I feel the loss expressed. It saddens me. kathy
2006-05-20


Zoya Zaidi
A charming surrender
You make knight in armour, a
hero you are indeed !

((hugs daer hero)))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-20