So basically I can't stop writing haikus.


Adventures---

her consumption was
planned: rather like wood floors and
a new beginning.

he consumed her with
aggressive starlight, and she
remembered it all.

there was hot distrust
and cool, gentle mending of
past, lingering wrongs.

she did not know what
she really thought about him:
but, in that moment----

she felt beautiful,
and his hands in her hair said:
it is all okay.

she believed him with
the physicality of
tongue and teeth and lips.

the stars said to her:
please forget. please remember.
and he gently said:

"i am so sorry."
she smiled and let him drink
her moon-beam cleanness.

"it's all okay," she
repeated into the dark.
and she wanted to

be most beautiful
rather like venus hanging
over his shoulder.

proud and afraid, she
acquiesced into the grass----
and, for once, she lived.



Haiku by MiVidaDeEpílogos.
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Written on 2006-05-21 at 19:17

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Nugget
you are astounding. i always look for your name on the que because i know it means something amazing is on its way. you really speak to what i feel. thank you so much.
2006-12-22


Dan Cederholm
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Yes well done a great haiku suite!!!

about Love and Life!!!

Rgds Dan


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2006-05-25


Christian Ward
Genius. Someone must have bottled genius and you must have drank it, because that's all I can say about this. A picturesque moment of heaven
2006-05-22


PoeticProcrastination
Simply enchanting.

<3
2006-05-22


Inked.
=]
2006-05-21


Amanda Manmohan
This was perfect... I loved every part of it. All I can say is... wow! Well done. You conveyed your emotions extremely well.
2006-05-21


Onyeka Nwelue
This is beautiful and stylistic...
2006-05-21