The Renrhyme format is a real challenge but it provides drama and drive in a poem. This is my second attempt at using it.
It has no sense of care or woe
With leaves afly and trees bent low
We press ahead through the forest gap
Struggling hard to reach the goal
The fall winds blows its biting snap
This wind is a unplanned deadly trap
With leaves afly and trees bent low
My Horse stumbles it's breath a rasp
It has no sense of care or woe
Spur driven now it's head hung low
we press ahead through the forest gap
Poetry by josephus
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Written on 2017-10-30 at 18:59
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Vicious Wind
The fall wind blows a biting snapIt has no sense of care or woe
With leaves afly and trees bent low
We press ahead through the forest gap
Struggling hard to reach the goal
The fall winds blows its biting snap
This wind is a unplanned deadly trap
With leaves afly and trees bent low
My Horse stumbles it's breath a rasp
It has no sense of care or woe
Spur driven now it's head hung low
we press ahead through the forest gap
Poetry by josephus
Read 628 times
Written on 2017-10-30 at 18:59
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