This poem is a truncated, or shortened, sonnet with 14 lines in iambic trimeter. A normal sonnet features 14 lines in iambic pentameter...


Matters of Global Priority

Man explores outer space
with probes and rocket ships,
whilst here the human race
ebbs from the headlong tips

of balance: wars, famine,
waste, hunger, crime, disease,
and his wild greed worsens
the earth's untold crises.

Why not spend the vast wealth
of this world for the need
here first, then explore space
at light-speed (once we're freed

of what destroys our race)?
If not, we'll be replaced!




Sonnet by Ngoc Nguyen The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2018-05-30 at 00:05

Tags Extinction  Survival  World 

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Excellent. And the three-beat, six-syllable (give or take) lines are very well made: concise, sharply focussed. A joy to read!
2018-05-30


chuma okafor
Good question- 'why not spend the money here on earth, where there is need' Bold!
2018-05-30