Nothing in particular just a love poem


The Beauty of Your Tenderness by M.A.Meddings

There were times
As I told you
That I loved you
I saw you close your eyes
And felt the sadness
of your disdain

But there were times
You came so close
Your eyes bright
Shining with a soft light
And then I saw
The beauty of your tenderness





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-28 at 11:10

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Teala
This is a wonderfully written, tender poem. I adore it!
2006-05-29



Disdain is not sad, so... maybe it wasn't disdain but just sadness?...
Anyway, just as delicate and tender as ever, hero!
2006-05-28


Shas Ramlogan
This poem is powerful, emotional and passionate. The words beautifully paint images of the sadness and tenderness.
2006-05-28


Kathy Lockhart
Those are the moments we long for...to see the tenderness after so much disdain. :) kathy
2006-05-28