this is about how some people think that have
a 'fat' problem when they look in the mirror a 'distorted image'
of themselves that can lead to eating disorders.

I'm stuck linking the last chorus with a verse to the rest of the song.
~liz~



Distorted Image [song]


[Verse One]

Imperfections it brings to the surface
all your 'flaws' from it you can't hide
"Lose that Fat, then you won't be ugly!"
It's a distorted image - but you believe it's evil lies.

[Chorus]

It's a ..... Distorted image, telling lies to your face
a distorted image, you wish you could drop out of the human race
a distorted image, to this world you wanna say goodbye
That distorted image keeps making you cry [x2]

[Verse Two]

Who do you see when you look in the mirror?
why does being 'you' make you alone at night cry?
A distorted image, staring hatedly back at you
to the fat oozing out of it reflection you wanna say goodbye.

[Chorus]

It's a ..... Distorted image, telling lies to your face
a distorted image, you wish you could drop out of the human race
a distorted image, to this world you wanna say goodbye
That distorted image keeps making you cry [x2]

[Verse Three (missing at this point in time) ]

[Repeat Chorus]

It's a ..... Distorted image, telling lies to your face
a distorted image, you wish you could drop out of the human race
a distorted image, to this world you wanna say goodbye
That distorted image keeps making you cry [x2]

[Bridge ( also missing at this point in time)]

[Last Chorus]

It's a..... Distorted image, lying shattered on the floor
A distorted image, all it lies of self hate is now gone
A distorted image, you've allowed 'love of yourself' to walk back in tranquility's door
That distorted image, of yourself you don't see no more. [x2].

27/05/06




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-29 at 11:25

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Painful Profits
I agree with him. It is very good, do you have music to it?
2006-06-03


Christian Ward
Your song has a good beat to it and a clear message. Good work :D
2006-05-31