I saw her standing against a building as I was riding a bus one day.


Goth Princess



Black hair parted to an edged obsessive glow
gothic arch framing an alabaster face
mirrors her vulva captured in tight black pants
Sharp lines
severe
Tight breasts shark edged
Dog collar, Studded
Black, pervasive
Eyes, lips, nails, Standing, legs crossed.
Body shouting a defiant slouch.
A small woman on guard against an intrusive world.
eyes turned out in arresting poise
Waiting...




Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2019-04-27 at 13:38

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I like the straight description and then your editorial, as it were, fresh language: "shouting a defiant slouch"! And the perfectness of "a small woman on guard against an intrusive world." Well captured!
2019-04-30


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done, Joe, quick strokes, excellent likeness.
2019-04-28