Ghost of Heino
My reading of this post went very well
2021-09-26

Ann Wood
Nice picture of words I love it well done Jim
2019-10-16

Sameen
Love it. I would put the last word in a separate line but that's just me.
2019-07-23

MetaPoetics
Each line creates a new image. It is indeed a picturesque description of the auditory imagery.
2019-07-22

Ah, yes, there are those moments, and this one was captured quite nicely!
2019-07-21

Lawrence Beck
A daring, very immediate, poem. Nicely done!
2019-07-21

Marie Cadavieco
Brilliant. Who needs more? The sounds of nature. The most relaxing and comforting sounds in the world. There is a feeling of serenity, in the short lines, which say just enough, no more. As you say: it is enough, this.

- Marie
2019-07-20

Jamsbo Rockda
Nice. A few moments captured.
2019-07-20

josephus
Beautifully written, Jim. The last line is the perfect summarization.
2019-07-20

wonderful poem😉
2019-07-20