Short Work

 

Mrs Eliot sets us to writing haiku,
which strikes me as teaching bait-worms to fish.

I’ve never seen a class exhibit such furrowed-brow consternation.

 

We’re hunched at our desks, as helpless

as the Founding Fathers must’ve been

tryin’ to come up with that We the People line.

 

In any case we’re at it.

 

 

Laura writes on spring:

 

Through the sidewalk crack

comes the first of spring’s heralds—

dandelion roars.

 

 

Regina writes on summer by anticipating fall:

 

Mare beneath the elm

flicks her tail in impatience

for fall’s cooling breeze.

 

 

Seventeen syllables is a mouthful and then some for Colt.
He writes on fall:

 

Frisky calves butt heads,

sunning dams bring up their cud—

have themselves a chaw.

 

 

I haven’t made up my mind which season to write on.

 

Winter seems so harsh,

spring and fall all too easy,

summer’s but a blink.

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2024-09-19 at 14:59

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alarian The PoetBay support member heart!
Winter seems so harsh,
spring and fall all too easy,
summer’s but a blink.

this last stanza made me meditating
what we really call summer for us humans
bears hibernate probably because they eat
so much food and they are wild animals
that you find in circuses
I thought wild animals would not be fat
they are fat and solitary
eat honey, are dangerous and omnivorous

to come back to your first stanza, haiku
it is a so compacted form of writing
that one has to struggle with the meaning

you did a great job
2024-09-19


Liam The PoetBay support member heart!
Careful written words
Gave thought to this readers mind
Neat use of Haiku

I enjoyed this.
2024-09-19