Weather Or Not

Thunder rolls in the northeast
No winds but the scent of rain
Pervades the calm on the porch
Sun strikes a drooping ancient pine
Standing against a slate grey
Eastern sky as evening competes
With afternoon for first billing
On a sultry summer Sunday





Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2019-07-29 at 01:42

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Excellent sketch.
2019-07-29


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
The poem is good but the title is hilarious.
2019-07-29



I like this. Lines four through seven strike me as especially sharp, and with the wry wit of the evening and afternoon "compet[ing] ...for first billing." A joy!
2019-07-29