Sun dappled, we sat


Sun dappled blue waves
gently caress the white sandy shore
Walking slowly with the one I adore
While high above seagulls call.

Caress the white sandy shore
Sun dappled blue waves gently lap,
Upon the sand for hours we talked and sat
Before going for a drive in your black Cadillac.

Upon the sand, for hours, we talked and sat
Watching the waves come and go
time seemed to tick very slow
as closer our love does grow.
02/01/2020



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Read 389 times
Written on 2020-01-09 at 03:22

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text



I like what you've done here, with both the "carry-over" lines from one stanza to another, and with a certain flexibility of rhyme (lap/sat/Cadillac). An enjoyable read!
2020-01-09