The Drowsing Period

Quiet
Pensive
The saplings
Speak in drowsy
Thoughts of spring
And life as in a dream
Snow soft comforter warms
Their roots protecting golden sap
The stuff of life awaiting awakening



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Written on 2020-01-09 at 15:39

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nice! Here's to the better days to come.
2020-01-09



The rhythm of the poem is secure, the diction equally so. An achievement and a delight!
2020-01-09


MetaPoetics The PoetBay support member heart!
I like the way the poem progresses: both visually and thematically. A joy to read!
2020-01-09