For the pantoum challenge
Was listening to Pink Floyd and Linkin Park

~L.~


Insanity, Sane? Pantoum Challenge


Insanity resides in the mind of the sane
it escapes sometimes when under strain
but truely remarkable is the brain
it CAN heal despite insanity's claim.

It escapes sometimes, when under strain
it twists and turns deceiving the mind
but truely remarkable is the brain
especially when others treat people kind.

It twists, and turns, deceiving the mind
thoughts of the despicable kind,
to the truth, we are sometimes blind,
insanity resides; in the mind of the sane.

11/01/2020



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2020-01-11 at 12:18

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MetaPoetics The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this pantoum very much. It kind of feels like an interesting wordplay, the way lines repeat themselves with some subtle differences.
2020-01-13



Nicely done! You have an affinity for the pantoum!

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2020-01-11