a small-talk-over-dinner-situation adding to the A. Straight Story


after we returned all we could talk about were


guarding platoons

ambushed



beneath silent enemies

they found purple crocuses



Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-06-05 at 23:50

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this is a powerful statement about love
rgds mike well done
2006-06-06


Zoya Zaidi
MY dear Laurdes,
All four lines do the same thing:
Clitch my heart:
Guns and Roses, Blue Crocusses and all!

**Hugs dear Laurdes, what a heart**

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-06


Kathy Lockhart
Life and Death-------Beauty and Ugliness. I love the last line: "they found purple crocuses" This gave this whole piece a piercing blow! Kathy
2006-06-06