on a gloomy afternoon in Kathmandu


Lockdown

grey vest fluttering
murky marshmallows floating
ash drops from my joint



Haiku by Karan Ram Sharma
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Written on 2020-04-29 at 09:55

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shells
In those three descriptive lines, I'm feeling the gloom.
2020-04-30


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Quite picturesque and dynamic with all the fluttering, floating, and dropping movements. It captures a moment in time, which is what a good haiku should do. Bravo!
2020-04-29